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Thursday, 22 October 2015

The Sun poem




here is a poem about the sun i use simil and Adjectives
Hope you like and Comment on my blog Thank you.  
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:44

    i like the way you got nice words
    nice work.

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  2. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:55

    WOW Calais,
    i like the way you describe the sun I really like the way you used similes and adjectives and verbs.Maybe next time you should write a longer sense then it is big

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